Saturday, September 22, 2012

Controversial novels--what do you think?

Over the years there have been wonderful literary works introduced to us and then many have been taken away due to one reason or another.  What do all of you think?  I'm going to list these works here and you can comment on them.  Tell us whether or not you think they should be banned and why.

Number one, and I can't believe this book was banned, but here it is:



Yes, the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain was banned for being "trash only suitable for the slums" according to Concord public library.



Merriam Webster and American Heritage Dictionaries were banned in California elementary schools in 2010 for having the definition for "oral sex" listed in them.



Grapes of Wrath had been and often is banned  due to obscenity as well as for painting the country in a negative light.





James and the giant peach was banned due to violence and obscenity.

Now there are many, many more that can be added to this list, but I'll start with these for the time being. If you would like to list one here and whether or not you agree with it being banned, please do so.  
Let us all know what your thoughts are on these books. We really want to know.






Featured Halloween blog!

A terrific blog for the month of October.  You can't miss this.  She has games, short stories, featured bloggers, etc.  One of the best blogs I've come across this year.  I just love it!

Check our Haunted Palooza at What happens in Venice with Diana Henry Cachey.

Halloween is just around the corner fans! GOBLINS, WITCHES, AND GHOSTS are slowly lurking closer and closer to us. To make October even better, I am going to be a featured writer for  HAUNTED PALOOZA event for October at www.whathappensinvenice.com. Sign-up for the blogs (hint that helps you win a prize) then WATCH SHORT VIDEO to learn more HERE. http://youtu.be/mpl2EmnNnqc. 

I hope to see all of you there.  It's going to be a spooktacular time!

Thursday, September 20, 2012

Spine-tingling reads

I love to curl up on my favorite chair with an edge of your seat horror novel during the winter, which is fast approaching.  I can feel the upcoming snow on the air every evening.
When we think of Halloween, we think of a good scare.  What better way to spend the month of October than with the terrifying works of some of our best authors?
Stephen King will, of course, pop up in the minds of many readers as well as Dean Koontz.  I'm going to mention some less obvious authors today with the hopes that you will all give them a try.  They are definitely worth the time.

Shadow of night- a novel by Deborah Harkness.  Number two on Amazon best seller list. 
Publisher: Penguin
Received 807 five stars


John dies at the end by David Wong
Publisher: Thomas Dunne Books; Reprint edition (September 29, 2009)
Received 302 five stars so far.


Children of the fog by Cheryl Kaye Tardif
Publisher: Imajin Books
Received 167 five star reviews so far.


A discovery of witches by Deborah Harkness
Publisher: Penguin
Received 811 five stars so far.


Publisher: Corvallis Press
Received 166 Five star reviews

I hope you all find something wonderful here, but in case you don't, here is a list of classic horror novels guaranteed to send chills up your spine.

All of the following novels can be found at the following link plus several more scary as heck novels.



Ghost story 
By Peter Straub

In life, not every sin goes unpunished.
GHOST STORY
For four aging men in the terror-stricken town of Milburn, New York, an act inadvertently carried out in their youth has come back to haunt them. Now they are about to learn what happens to those who believe they can bury the past -- and get away with murder.
Peter Straub's classic bestseller is a work of "superb horror" (The Washington Post Book World) that, like any good ghost story, stands the test of time -- and conjures our darkest fears and nightmares.



The exorcist 
By William Peter Blatty

The Exorcist changed popular culture forever. Now, William Peter Blatty's groundbreaking story of faith and supernatural suspense--the runaway #1 bestseller that started it all--is reincarnated in this spectacular newly polished and rewritten 40th Anniversary Edition of the novel that burst through society's seven seals and paved the way for the entire genre that followed it: the unforgettable The Exorcist.


The Amityville Horror
By Jay Anson

In December 1975, the Lutz family moved into their new home on suburban Long Island. George and Kathleen Lutz knew that, one year earlier, Ronald DeFeo had murdered his parents, brothers, and sisters in that house. But the property complete with boathouse and swimming pool and the price were too good to pass up. Twenty-eight days later, the entire Lutz family fled in terror. This is the spellbinding, best-selling true story that gripped the nation, the story of a house possessed by evil spirits, haunted by psychic phenomena almost too terrible to describe.


Have a hauntingly good time everyone!







Saturday, September 15, 2012

Halloween




Here we are again, looking forward to another year of haunted houses, pumpkin patches, and all the other wonderful things that accompany this hauntingly perfect holiday.  I am certainly not going to miss out on the fun this year.  For the month of October, this blog will be all about the best of spooky novels, authors that keep us at the edge of our seats as shivers crawl swiftly up our spines.  Yes, it will be a spooky event.  I will also cover tips for writing great horror and thriller novels, and don't forget to check out the numerous links I'll be listing for sites that offer hair-raising stories and creepy ideas to make your Halloween the best it can be.
It's going to be a hauntingly good time.

Wednesday, August 29, 2012

"Freed" Hell happens second edition

Freed

Hell happens second edition

Alright everyone, I have finally finished my new book cover for "Freed" and it is amazing.  I'm so happy I broke down and ponied up the dough for this.  It is far better than the other and let's face it, the cover design of a novel can make or break sales.  It is so true.  Here is a picture of the entire book cover, back and fron as well as just a front view.  I hope you all like it.  I fell in love.  It's so beautiful!


Front view


Entire book cover


Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Dark of midnight writer's nightmare!!!

Well, I thought I would finally get around to the final edit of my new novel "Dark of midnight" so I could release it within the next month or so, but I found that Windows 7 locked ALL my documents to include my manuscripts and I cannot edit, copy/paste, or anything.  Now, I will have to rewrite the entire thing if I wish to publish it.  So far I have written the beginning of the novel, not much, but it's a start.  
Here it is.  I hope you like it.

Dark of midnight

Basilisk didn't blink as it watched her from the shadows.  The lovely queen of Karay looked out the window at her ruined kingdom.  Her flaxen hair was swept back in a fishtail braid that draped over the shoulder of her heavy black cloak.  A slight breeze played with the wisps of hair that framed her heart-shaped face.
Basilisk's cat-like pupils dialated from amidst blood red orbs as it studied her.  It couldn't see the color of her eyes from that distance, but remembered their soft amber glow from another life, a life that was long since gone.  
Normal beings would not have been able to see her as well as Basilisk's even with the light from the torches that illuminated her small frame from the grounds below her window. Basilisk was different, however.  It's sight was better than that of a cat's in the rich of midnight.  She didn't seem to notice it watching, anticipating the moment it would take her.
"Soon, dear lady...very soon," it hissed beneath its breath.  For now, it had to feed and its next meal waited.  It slinked off into the night, quiet and unseen.  The soughing of the wind it made and the giant lizard-like pattern it left in the dead, dry earth were the only evidence of its presence.  
Its talons clicked on the stone floor as it scurried into the castle's dungeon.  The guards had never seen it since they were otherwise preoccupied with their desperate and futile attempts to save the kingdom.  No one ever went near the dungeon anymore, not since Basilisk had unleashed the darkness on it.  The people shied away from the evil they surely felt seeping from the dingy, damp walls below the castle.  
Basilisk squeezed through the confilned space of the hall, feeling the cold, irregular stones pressing in on its slimy body.  The long spikes jutting from its spine lightly scratched the ceiling with a screeching sound that echoed back to its ears.  A normal person would have no difficulty fitting through the tunnels beneath the castle, but something as massive as Basilisk had to make quite the effort.
Basilisk could have taken another form, but anticipation was too overwhelming.  It could not concentrate hard enough for the change to happen.  It was worth the difficulty though, especially with dinner waiting and Basilisk was ravenous.
It smelled the delicious fear on the man it was about to consume.  That particular emotion made its food taste remarkably better.  Because of this, Basilisk held its prey captive for long lengths of time.  It periodically gouged small portions from their flesh and ate it in front of them to increase the aroma of fear that wafted from their tormented bodies.  Their terror grew the longer it kept them, which added to their flavor like a succulent marinade.
There he was, the savory little snack.  Tears streaked down the man's dirty face and his bloodshot eyes were swollen from lack of sleep.  Of course, there was no way the pathetic man could sleep knowing he would soon become a very delicious meal.
Basilisk chuckled low in its throat.  The man's skin, torn in places where the creature had sliced away tasty bites, trembled as if he were freezing.  But, it wasn't cold in the dungeon.  Basilisk used magic to raise the temperature to sustain the life of its prey.  No, the man wasn't cold.  He was terror-stricken.
The man shook; his eyes grew wide, bulging in their sockets.  He strained against the chains that bound him, but to no avail.  They only clattered against his efforts and bit deeper into his skin.  Delicious, warm blood trickled down his forearms and dripped onto the dirt floor.  Basilisk's nostrils flared as it took in the intoxicating scent.  The musky air was instantly ripe with the smell of it.
Basilisk's pet leaned against the wall nearby, her tan cloak hanging limply from her petite frame.  Her dull, brown eyes were vacant, but she smiled sweetly.  She had pulled her mousy hair back in a bun and although she was not a pretty woman, she was somehow cute with her large almond-shaped eyes and the minute splash of freckles across the bridge of her turned-up nose.  
She had the ability to rip the voice from anyone she wished.  When the victims screamed, she ripped, and Basilisk devoured.  Her power was the only reason the creature controlled her.  Just like the man sobbing soundlessly from amidst the thick chains that kept him prisoner, she had never stood a chance against Basilisk's powers.  She had soon given in, becoming a mere puppet.  She would never remember any of this if she ever escaped, but that wasn't likely to happen.
The scaly creature watched with amused curiosity as the man quivered.  It relished in the escalating terror that mantled its victim's face from the exertion of trying to scream.  Veins bulged in the man's neck.  The vessel protruding from his forehead looked as though it might burst at any moment.
Try, try, but you'll never make a sound, little man.  Basilisk snickered at its prey's weak struggles for freedom.  Yes, be afraid, be utterly terrified.  The more fear you have, the more delicious you will be.
Dirt flew through the air as the man kicked furiously.  One foot hit Basilisk's front leg with a dull thud.  It was only a nuisance.
Dislocating its elongated jaws with a gruesome, snapping sound, the creature's mouth opened to a massive cave of razor sharp teeth.  Its scaly body shuddered with excitement akin to arousal.
The mouth of its prey gaped in a silent a scream as the freckle-face woman worked her magic.  The dirt between the man's legs darkened as his bladder released its contents.  Basilisk didn't mind.  It was nothing more than a touch of salt that seasoned its prey.
The creature quickly sunk its teeth into the soft, quivering flesh protecting the man's vital organs.  Bones 
cracked, snapped, crunched.  Warm blood erupted into Basilisk's mouth.  It trembled with pleasure as its meal jerked and feebly struck out at his attacker.  Crimson fluid spurted from the man's mouth.  His eyes bulged then slowly dimmed in the last agonizing moment of life.  Yes, fear did taste delicious. 



This is only the intro and it appears the new program I am using to write this has absolutely no spell check to help with typos and it keeps messing up my formatting when I try to save.  Wow, what a headache this is going to be.

Tenses

Tenses

     When you are writing tenses it can really drive you crazy.  It's not always easy to get them right.  I have edited and critiqued so many manuscripts that have major problems in this area.  It's enough to make you pull your hair out.  Most importantly, you need to know that the English form has three different tenses to choose from.  These tenses relate to time:  future, present, and past.  Once you have that established, they are then subdivided into other categories  that you will need to know about and understand.
     There are: simple tense, progressive tense, perfect tense, and perfect progressive tense.
     Yes, I know.  It is confusing.  However, once you have this down, your writing will flow better and sound more professional.  The subdivisions of tenses tell the reader when something in particular will be done, is being done, or has been done.

Ready, set, here we go!

Let's look at simple tense-

Simple past tense- An action that began and ended in the past.  
Simple present tense- An action that is common or repeated.
Simple future tense- An action that will occur in the future.

Examples:

To make it easier to know if you are in the correct form, use the following rules:
Simple past tense- Begin with "Yesterday I...."  Example:  "Yesterday I rode the roller coaster."
Simple present tense- Begin with "Today I..."  Example:  "Today I  ride the roller coaster."
Simple future tense- Begin with "Tomoorow I..."  Example:  "Tomorrow I will ride the roller coaster."

Simple?  No.  Well, we're not done yet.

Let's move on to the progressive tense.  This is a bit of a step up, but I'm sure you'll get it.

Past progressive- An event that was going on at some point in the past.  Note: To create this type of tense, use "were and was" as well as adding (ing) to the verb.
Present progressive- An action that is going on at the time it is being written about.  Note: Use the words "are and am" as well as adding (ing) to the verb to create this tense.
Future progressive- An action that's continuous and will happen some time in the future.  Note: To create this type of tense, use the words "shall be" and "will be" plus add (ing) to the end of the verb.

Examples:

Past progressive-  "I was riding the roller coaster yesterday."
Present progressive- "I am riding the roller coaster today."
Future progressive- "I will be riding the roller coaster tomorrow."

Now we will cover the perfect tense.

Past perfect tense- A past action that occurred prior to another past action.  I know it sounds confusing, but I'll give you examples in a minute.  It really isn't as hard as it seems.  Note:  This is always created by using the word "had" and using the past participle form of the verb.
Present perfect- An action that began in the past, but is still happening at the present time.  Note: Create this form by using the words "have" and "has" in conjunction with the past participle form of the verb.
Future perfect tense- An action in the future that will happen prior to some other action.  Note: Always use the words "will have" when using this tense along with the past participle form of the verb.

Now that you are thoroughly confused, let me give you a few examples to better illustrate these tenses for you.  I know they can be confusing, so don't scream.  Take a breath and relax.  You'll get this.

Examples:

Past perfect tense- "I had ridden the roller coaster ride for  a whole day before I finally went home."
Present perfect tense- "I have ridden the roller coaster ride all day."
Future perfect tense- "I will have ridden the roller coaster ride all day before finally going home."

O.K.  Everyone breathing alright?  You haven't pulled your hair out yet, have you?  I hope not because we are about to move on to the last step to this information download.  Hang in there, you're are almost done!

Past perfect progressive tense- A past continuous action that finished prior to some other past action.  Note: You will always use the words "had been" and add (ing) to the verb to form this tense.
Present perfect tense- An action that has been repeated over time in the past, went on in the present, and will  possibly continue into the future.  Note: Always use the words "has been" and "have been" as well as the past participle form of the verb to create this past tense.
Future perfect tense- A future continuous action that will end prior to some point in the future. Note: Always use the words "will have been" as well as adding (ing) to the end of the verb when writing in this tense.

Take it easy.  I am going to make this a bit easier by adding a few examples.  I won't leave you hanging, I promise.

Examples:

Past perfect tense-  "Before I went home, I had been riding the roller coaster all day."
Present perfect tense- "For the entire day I have been riding the roller coaster ride."
Future perfect tense- "By evening time, I will have been riding the roller coaster all day."

If you are still struggling, check out the following site.  It's great and I'm sure you'll have this down in no time.